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作者: Z鱼雷鲨 时间: 2015-3-29 19:29 标题: Great Works Box II附赠内容：独角兽原案《月光殖民地的高达》

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本来，巴纳吉的家是ZZ的全封闭殖民地，一个见不到地球也见不到宇宙的地方，而且他的名字也不一样……

• Prologue: The story begins approximately five years ago. Join Banagher (ジョイン・バナージ) of Moon Moon is taken by his grandfather Cardeas outside of their world into outer space to witness it for the first time.
• The Present: A shuttle led by Suberoa Zinnerman withdraws from a certain colony. It’s “cargo” is an isolated Mineva. Also onboard the shuttle as cargo is the body of a mobile suit that is to become the prime field of the psycho frame. A mobile suit squadron of the Earth Federation Forces pursues the shuttle. Marida Cruz who pilots the Kshatriya repels them. The shuttle barely escapes.
• The Daily Life of Moon Moon: a fifteen year old Join, his family and friends.
o The breakdown of the environmental management device invites stormy winds to the tranquil and boring everyday lifestyle. At the calling of the ruler Sarasa Moon, a suicide corps is organized to bring “people who can fix the machine” from the outside world.

o Join contends with the fear and sense of adventure. His grandfather, knowing of the outside world and his strong-minded older sister Micott, pushes his back. Before a Gundam head enshrined silently deep in the forest, Join tells his childhood friend Saki Mentor that he’s volunteering for the suicide corps.
• Journey of the Suicide Squad: the team is made up of ten or so men.
o As Join is the youngest in the group, Meran Horoi (partner in crime/bad friend? 悪友) treats him as a good-for-nothing. However, despite Daguza Mackle being leader and Ronan Lugus being the elder who is piloting the space craft, they’re extremely unreliable.

o The group comes into contact with Zinnerman and the others shuttle. Join, Mineva and Marida all meet. Believing in their words, should they return to Moon Moon? Opinions are divided. Later on, Join and Meylan clash over a large source of trouble.
• In the end, they return to Moon Moon bringing along Zinnerman and the others.
o Moon Moon’s warm welcome. Join sees the way of being a “trained man” in Zinnerman. However, Sarasa senses a dangerous aura about Zinnerman and the others. She contacts Mineva. There is an unapproachable firmness of Marida who is protecting her. Her isolated profile speaks the words “duty” and “obligation”. Mineva feels that kind of Marida is depressing. Marida, who has an interest in the Gundam head, proposes investigating the rumors by connecting it to the prime field of the psycho frame and turning on the power. If they could use it, they confiscate it to use it in their forces but, Join and the others are simply amused. The instant it connected to the body of the psycho frame, the NTD system activates. The machine rumbles ominously. Just then, the pursuit from the Federation Forces approaches Moon Moon.
• The Nahal Argama, a space battleship affiliated with Londo Bell, a Zeon remnant suppression force.
o Although Commander Otto Mitas, the captain, tries to avoid interfering with Moon Moon to the best of his ability, headquarters sensed mischief with Neo Zeon and places priority on the capture of Mineva.

o The residents of Moon Moon, who only know a history of isolation, do not have negotiating abilities with the outside. Join and Meylan become irritated with the priest’s incompetence. Using them as a shield, Zinnerman creates an opportunity to escape.

o An elite officer, Ensign Marcenas Riddhe, falls victim to Zinnerman’s allurement and opens hostilities.

o Ensign Beecha Oleg’s restraint wasn’t enough and the Zeta Plus Marcenas is piloting unleashes the first gunfire. Marida returns fire in the Kshatriya. Moon Moon is quickly engulfed in the horrors of war.
• Join, unable to watch Marida fighting alone and having no way of knowing Zinnerman’s machinations, climbs into the cockpit of the psycho frame.
o The NTD completely awakens instantly and the mobile suit with a Gundam face, the Moon Gundam, activates.

o Join’s desperate battle. The unexpected strength of the Moon Gundam.

o Marcenas is pressed into defeat in his first battle.

o However, Mineva dislikes Zinnerman’s way of doing things and because she left the shuttle to help the citizens take refuge, she falls into the hands of the Nahal Argama.

o The fires of war burn Join’s house and his grandfather is seriously wounded. Touched by the words of his dying grandfather, Join makes a vow to rescue Mineva.

作者: CC8P 时间: 2015-3-29 20:00

问下这个和月面危机的原案哪个先出？

作者: CHIKUSYOU 时间: 2015-3-30 05:18 标题: 回复 #3 Z鱼雷鲨的帖子

1.MOONMOON是岛1型的小殖民地，不是ZZ里那种封闭式岛3
2.这个本来就是独角兽，最初稿的原案就是个草稿，用来内部阅览的。
之后召集人马开始听从各方意见，一直不停的修改修改再修改经历过很多次变动才成了最终连载小说版的内容
虽然大框架几乎都改了，反倒是很多细节设定直接沿袭了过来。

顺便剧透
时代不是0096而是0093之前
原案里真鸭、娜娜依，骡子都有登场
弗朗托是真鸭副手
最终战和12妹死斗的是邱尼

米寇特是巴纳吉的姐姐
而人物米兰则是融合了拓也和安杰洛的人物

搭载精神骨架的猪脚机是MOON-GUNDAM （而且还真有三台）
独角兽高达是NTD试验机米兰驾驶的反派机
代替里谢尔的是Z+
除此之外还有百式改和杰钢定制机（骡子专用特装机）

小说版里的卫星建造者战舰 “墨瓦臘泥加”的名字在原案里是最终战的大型MA（弗朗托机）

总的来说，感觉比改版还有看点

作者: Z鱼雷鲨 时间: 2015-3-30 15:51 标题: 回复 #2 CC8P 的帖子

肯定还是月面危机，这个否定后福井紧接着就开始写文字版独角兽了

是更好看啊，独角兽家族内斗审美疲劳，会动的Z+也是时候上镜了
另外把传说中被改成邱尼的缺氧版卡疯子和失踪版哈曼拉出来也不错

作者: gawainli 时间: 2015-4-1 14:04

QUOTE:

原帖由 CHIKUSYOU 于 2015-3-30 05:18 发表

1.MOONMOON是岛1型的小殖民地，不是ZZ里那种封闭式岛3
2.这个本来就是独角兽，最初稿的原案就是个草稿，用来内部阅览的。
之后召集人马开始听从各方意见，一直不停的修改修改再修改经历过很多次变动才成了最终连载小说版的 ...

从马反的前传改成后传了么

作者: Z鱼雷鲨 时间: 2015-4-1 16:07 标题: 回复 #5 gawainli 的帖子

原因可能是要照顾海牛等等的销量，外加推出新机？

作者: gawainli 时间: 2015-4-16 22:05

QUOTE:

原帖由 Z鱼雷鲨 于 2015-4-1 16:07 发表

原因可能是要照顾海牛等等的销量，外加推出新机？

更多是因为结局太好猜吧...

作者: xcross 时间: 2015-4-22 16:40

果然原案更复古

作者: mgfyrr 时间: 2015-4-22 18:16 标题: 回复 #7 gawainli 的帖子

已某人塞私货和讨好富野的特性
如果放在CCA前面，那真的是只能当黑历史来处理了
现在最多就是不把几本小说加入正史（虽说本来也不是），在往后的扯不到多大关系

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